This is so true. People have to learn to let their feelings out because it helps them get over things. Otherwise, they are kept inside and cause more pain. Great job of portraying this!

Beautiful! You can write poetry, too! You're a great talent!

ok, not exactly sure what thats really about. not so much that i didn't understand your words, just that the whole poem didn't seem to fit or flow. it just didn't come together for me. its probably just me, im sure it makes plenty sense to you. anyway, thank you for reviewing, and if you have a better title for that poem, please tell me!

i like that concept that when you don't cry and let your emotions shrivel inside like grandpa's old prunes, you are dying.