wow... you know i like this one because it's meaningful. Has tiff seen this? you capture the feeling well. =0

Very good poem and I am sorry for your loss. Fate truly does work in mysterious ways and you expressed this notion well. Good job, stay strong.
*cosmo-queen*

Wow, you have romance, you have general, and you have angst (my favorite genre). I mean it's not like I'm a depressed person (and I'm not goth), happy just doesn't cut it for me lol. good job (I say that in every review, but I really mean it each time lol)

Life sucks.
Great poem

You probably would have found out before the rest of us...
This poem describes it all
I have no more words to say... its all these emotions put together that i cant describe.
May peace come to him as well as his family

...Very heart touching...

I din't know Raymond very well, I didn't even know his name, but I feel strong condolence for his family, and for him...

I am at a loss of words now, and there is not enough space here for me to express everything that comes to mind, so I guess I will end now...
ok, bye...

It's so sad :(