Hey! I'm Canadian! Yay! This is pretty good! Great job!

-3theral

It was okay ... sort of sweet, interesting. mildly enjoyable, but not really astounding. it felt like a lot of other stories rolled together to make this. half way through i was sure i'd read it already. it did have a few good points, but they were spread far between the lows. maybe you should work on it some more?

and while im bitching, update just like the weayther, would ya?

It was a bit ambiguous at times, and although that annoyed me, it really portrayed the narrator's uncertanties. On the whole, very emotional and well-written!

Its 're beautiful.

Great story. You put your thoughts together very well and gave a peek into the complexity of breaking up but not forgetting. Well done. Then again I like all of your work!