good work here! i read it in spanish and in english, and i'm not sure which i liked better (perhaps they're the same.) one thing that i noticed is that in the seventeenth line or so, you wrote "soriendome" i checked it with the english version, and i think you might have meant to write "sonriendome"? just a thought.

Tu eres la autora?
Bueno, quien sea que sea... dile que la entiendo... mas que perfectamente... dile que su poema es mi diario de vida... dile que me gusta como escribe.. y que tiene talento... dile que siga asi

Sad.. but true.
I often feel like that's how the 2 special guys I admire view me. blAh. hehe

It's a really long poem. Took me about 3 min to finish it. The poem describe every detail carefully, you can actually picture everything going on. Good work!