 saturn696 2002-11-26 . chapter 1Most players I know of actually know that they play people. This story has a twist to it. PLEASE update! Also, I was wondering if you could read my new story and review it. it's called flashbacks |
 spartak 2002-11-16 . chapter 1 hey! great story there...onli....sometimes players DO know about their actions, but they just don't care..guess this is one of them..not so brite players...(no one else will get this)..but......CRAPTAK FOREVER!!!!! |
 Carly 2002-11-16 . chapter 1 That is sooooo good are you gonna write more? |
 Tara Cools 2002-11-15 . chapter 1*ouch* my eyes! i love the dialogue and the plot but PLEASE change the format! maybe space the dialogue out or something because at this rate i'm going to become blind! chris sounds like---your average player! i'm curious to see what will happen with him and lisa! update soon! |