I think this is a really deep and touching poem. I enjoyed it mucho! I read The Science of Attraction on and thought I'd stop by here to read some of your original stuff b/c I liked that so much. I hope you keep writing for a long time. I will be a loyal fan!

It's very good! if you write a lot of stuff like this, i have some things you might like posted. On my bio I have the titles posted under Deeper and More Insightful Things for Me, or something like that... I haven't been on for a while...
I look forward to reading your other work!

Oh my. It's not often I find a poem that reflects my inner turmoil, but this one ahs done it quite perfectly. Wonderful.

It's so pretty! The imagery is great! And so emotional! You're a very good poet.

I really enjoyed your usage of the water imagery and the descriptions especially. I think maybe I'll go read more of your stuff ^^

Hey! this poem is amazing! I love how you hit the reader with angst, and the use of the water is great. I really like your writing style, and this poem is pretty neato-keen! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, its nice to hear what people think sometimes. =^-^= Other times, it doesnt really matter, but with writing, i think its important to inform the author whether they should shut the hell up or not!!! Thank you so much, again.

You seem to be really good at writing poems! This one is really beautiful, and makes you think. The imagery is lovely. ^.^

this was very descriptive and beautiful, but i don't see the outcast in it. I guess it could happen to anyone, eh? ^_^