i love the part about rewriting her life in golden ink. that was...quite unique. and eloquent. this is beautiful! need better adjectives...

wow! that was really pretty. I wish i could find that friend with golden ink. I'm a lot like that...all alone among everyone...

this is so sweet... reminds me of all you guys ::cries:: and how I will miss all of you... ::sobs::

You're an AWESOME writer! I love this poem. Keep up the good work! your poems and stories are really, really good...

Wee! The people on Dexter's don't have knees. La! I read this on * * (radio edit). Whoo!

Er. Shouldn't say whoo. Everything is so sad! Write one about happy sugar-dispersing bunnies!

-MB

Brit: Aw, so cute again _ My happy side is out! Run away! *Giggle*

I loved this piece. I particularly liked the line about translucent wings, and the line "Thats what stuffed animals are for" struck a cord for me (I'm such a fluffy person at heart!LOL) I loved how you put it into first person for the last verse, it added a specific element of sympathy and relation to the girl you were talking about.

Princess Sal and Kiara

this poem expresses so much of what im feeling at the moment. it's bittersweet- sweet with the knowledge of love to come, bitter with the fear of trust and being vulnerable. i also feel like the one who i will love already knows me, in a way. ur metaphors were beautiful, too. i particularly liked flying on "translucent wings". i interpreted it to mean that the wings dont physically exist, but that love gives u wings, emotionally. lovely poem!

Woah! This is great! You bring out the emotions, the words so well! I wish I could be like that!

How pretty...and it's so sweet...*sniff* I told you I'd review your stuff eventually! Good job!

Very sweet and touching. The beginning of this poem sounds like you are describing me... a little unnerving because of that, but it's all good. ::chuckle:: I love the format of this and your unique writing style... It really brings this peice of writing to life. Great job. ::smile::