This one is just interesting I like the last line... and by the way you lucky dog, you got the first review I have given on this site, treat yourself you deserve it.

I like this, creative.

Another nice focus of a certain image, moment in "You rip buttons off" to show haste, etc.

Fascinating combination of words.

I like the specific image you brought to express the splitting apart. It was not something so vague that could apply to anything, but was more unique to you.

I love that, "he slips me a chasm" Such a powerful line.

Hee, hee. I feel sorry for you. What an unpleasant experience!

I know the feeling of this...

Fun stuff.

Beauty is only skin deep, nice combat to that.

Hopeful, inspiring.

Ah the metamorphosis theme is gentle and lovely.

hm, yes.

The rhyme makes for excellent rhythm. This poem feels truly alive.

I like the multiple personalities in this.