This was an extremly good song...I loved drinking in every word...I'm no good at songs, but my thing is descriptive writing...anyway, your song really hit home...cuz that's the way I feel every day, except no one else feels it for me...

Rowen

this is actually a very good song, i like "i could cry/but i won't/ cause what would you think of me then". it hits close to home, in a good way.

A word usage was a liitle bit strong for my liking. But other then that it was a very good piece. Touching! Keep writing..

interesting, the flow seems a lil off to me in some areas for it to be a song, more poem like, but otherwise its fairly well written, spelling and other careless errors in it too, like it though i guess, good job

Wow, that was extremely good. I hope you put more up!

Blessed Be,

Raven

Pretty good. Parts of it sound more like a poem, but I'd have to hear the music. Nice job

-Jessie