 Grape 2004-03-27 . chapter 1WOW! Thats pretty intense, and truthfullty it reminds me of myself as well. Your a great poet, a real way with writing that attracts the audience's attention. (Forgive my spelling *laughs* Im horrible at it!)
Laters~ |
 Song of Innocence 2003-12-03 . chapter 1You're not the only one who feels that way. Sometimes I do too. And I like this poem. It's nice. |
 woodelf193 2003-02-07 . chapter 1This is really deep. Ur definately not the only one that feels this way. Ur just one of the few who dares to put it into words. I'd put it into words, but my parents might find it. My mom always guilt trips me w/the 'but i don't think u love me anymore'. Anyway, nice job! ~Woodelf193~:) |
 Risa7 2003-01-20 . chapter 1ooh, nice poem! I feel this way too sometimes. this is really good, u should post more poems. |
 annonymous 2002-11-30 . chapter 1 i know how you feel, sometimes its wierd because our parents grew up at a completely different time, and it just feels like they don't know at all what you're going through and they just DON'T understand, although maybe they try to. remember that you are where you are for a reason. everything will work out. God knows what He's doing. |
 raine 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 wow...kasey that was really good...
you have no idea how much that hits home
i love you soooooo much and don't ever want you to feel alone, you know that im always there for you...ALWAYS
love RAINE |
 Just Another Face 2002-11-18 . chapter 1Oh my god, i felt EXACTLY this way a little while ago like last year, my parents had been fighting on and off since i was around 6 and now they divorced this year, and my dad always used to tell me he loves me and he'd always say he'd belive me and my mom always said she'd protect me and listen but my dad didn't know my birthday, not like he cared, my mom didn't protect me from the creature i kept seeing. All they did was LIE. And now i'm off on my own, fending for myself, but thats ok, i ruin my life myself. I don't need thier help.
Buttttttttt That was a really good poem. ^_^ ::claps:: Good job!! ^_^
-Lyndz- -you can just ignore my rambling- |
 Holy Knight 2002-11-18 . chapter 1Awesome poem!! I kept reading and feeling every emotion the character was having even though I never experience it before. Great work on the poem! It's truly an obvious showing of your talent! |
 Veggiegrl1321 2002-11-18 . chapter 1ur not the only one, the poem reallly relates to me and my parents. we don't get along unless we are in public and have to. ur not alone... |