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   InnocentlyMysterious 7/12/05 . chapter 3this story is soo good so far, and it's so easy to relate to the characters. you write very well, and i'll be looking out for the further updates and chapters. well done, keep it up! i'm faving this baby;) |
| At least I have a Lamb 2/17/04 . chapter 3 Interesting... You should definitely continue this. June is a very interesting character. Is there a story about how she got her name, June? and is that going to be incorporated into the story? Just a hint; I'm interested in the physical appearance of your characters. Particularly June and Micheal (and Max). Please add that... like "she looked into ther mirror and saw her grey eyes staring back..." (except not as stupid as that!) hehehehehe...too much chocolate...What is up with all the ! ? So much fun! Update soon (not abandoning)...now I have to go read the rest of your stories! |
| Chibi K-chan 2/25/03 . chapter 3 Love your story! Keep up the good work! Gambette! |
| sapofbks2008 12/4/02 . chapter 3 The story rocks so far. I can't wait for more. |
| Gloria-Krasy 12/3/02 . chapter 3 I already love this story. Sometimes Michael gets on my nerves for treating June like this, but it would be really annoying if their relationships were sweeeeeet... There must be something bitter for good story. Well, that's all for now. |
| Cassie 12/1/02 . chapter 3 Ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh! Is Michael and June going to end up falling for each other? I mean most stories do start with two people who hate each other and then it slowly turns into love... lol, anyways, it's good. Keep writing...! |
| Don't want to 12/1/02 . chapter 3 good story, keep it up! - |
| StEvesTimeForLove 12/1/02 . chapter 3 GREAT STORY! Please write more as soon as you can!:0) |
| cbprice25 11/30/02 . chapter 3 I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for the first couple of chapters, but this is so good! I can't wait till I see how it turns out, you'll have to update really soon. If you don't I might die of suspense and you'll loose one reviewer. |
| kat 11/30/02 . chapter 3 fantastic start! |
| theMuse 11/30/02 . chapter 2 Wow... |
| theMuse 11/30/02 . chapter 1 S'okay. |
| Guest 11/25/02 . chapter 2 Michael sound so cool! Kinda like a mysterious, proud bad boy... lol, I'm obsessing with your made up character; but he sounds so HOT! I know I'm weird... but I can't help it...! |
| Guest 11/25/02 . chapter 2 OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH! Me like! more like me love! But anyways, this is a really good start... :) |
| Cassie 11/25/02 . chapter 2 This is cool! Please continue... Karla seem cool! Kinda remind me of my sister... |
