ok here's the run down i liked the first chapter and the second one but the 3rd one thru me for a loop althrough i realise the other man was hurt by his so called lovers actions why would he let himself die a 3rd time just find another mate. and the last chapter what set of marrion to break the computer when's the next update going up?

You write wonderfully!

Pancakes was really funny, it made me laugh.

Bliss made me shed some tears, it's so very sad, but I loved it nonetheless.

I can understand Marrio very well, computers can frustrate me to so much, too.

I really like this, and hope you write more soon.

This is really good,I hopeyou write more soon.

Damnit, I really liked all this stuff. It's just so well written and so descriptive without really shoving everything on you at once. Damnit. It's too good. Damnit. Great job, man.

THE BLIND ONE