Nika: Oooooooooooooooh. Me likies...

Cammie: Very powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it.

I enjoyed reading your story, Amber! It was an interesting slant on drunk driving, combining the harshness with a enthralling, realistic perspective.

The only problem I noticed was that you seem to slip from one tense to another (in the same sentence, not from the present to the past, which is obviously correct), and some quotation mark errors. If you want, you can send the story to me and I can correct them for you. They are simple errors, so they're not much of a problem, it'll just make your story look more professional. :)

Shada

Well, here goes...(For constructive critiscism).
a)Keep track of tenses.
b)Grammar (but v. minor)
c)Nothing I can find.

In other words, write more!

Deep, profound, and lovely...excellent writing, this is quite beautiful, and a frightening warning for those of us who tend towards the foolish side.
-Marie