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| TheLiftedLorax 2007-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseAw. I love this. It made me cry. |
| daneorange 2004-11-15 ch 1, | abuseoh dear. i'm quite embarrassed i'd be turning in a signed review just now.. that was just.. magnificent. this gets to me.. really does.. gets me warm inside, thank you very much for sharing this. =) |
| emperor heliogabalus 2004-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI especially like the fairy-tale theme you have going...the castle full of candles and such. This is a lovely, sad, touching story, and I liked it. I can sympathize with you...not the most popular child around. Anyhow, this is very nicely done. -Kris (the sporadic) |
| I wish i could fly 2004-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI'm just finding this now after what, two years? All I can say is wow that was beautiful |
| Terra 2003-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was wonderful. You could easily see the message, the emotion was clearly shown. Beautiful. |
| Just Wolf 2003-03-04 ch 1, | abusewow, this really rocks. Its SO well written, it sounds totally brilliant. (not the content - just the words). The story is good to in a bitter-bitter kind of way. |
| Fae Valintine 2002-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful........ |
| cut2bleed 2002-12-06 ch 1, | abusebeautiful... you made your message loud and clear. nothing lasts forever... fairytales will end.. no matter how much we dream. this was great. |
| freak of nature 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abuseYou've captured the feeling of 'you don't know what you've got until its gone' really effectively in this piece. nice job! |
| V 2002-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeen there, done that. I really like this piece. I sure can relate. |
| BlueMail 2002-11-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was bootiful. :-)...Oh and I hate that Tara is dead too *tear*...Willow's all lonely...anyways good story. brilliant. And what is wrong with tortoises... |
| Believable Facade 2002-11-19 ch 1, | abusewow...sniffle...this is moving!!! I wish I could get the words out so easily!!! and, btw... Angelina Jolie forever, dude she is hot!!! And beautiful at the same time!!! |
| Wood 2002-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseok that was so beautiful, i actually cried. *hugs* u rock dude...keep up the brill work! x |
| CrazyWriter 2002-11-18 ch 1, | abuse+applauds loudly+ Damn, that gets my UBERgood rating. I can't think of anything bad to say about it. Brava. |