This is terrific. I'm not a big fan of rhyme poems, but here you are showing a great commnd of both rhyme and meter.

Excellent.

Lowell

I loved this. :)

Wow. Yup: Wow. This is an amazing piece. Kind of the same feel as "A Midsummer Night's Dream", I think.only much more lyrical. Maybe more abstract? But that's what I love about it!

I fear it would be much too hard for me to accurately describe the pictures my mind created and the feelings that went through my heart as I read this. All I can say is, "You've done well!" with a pat on the back ^.^

Honest to goodness (despite whatever weird tone my mood-of-the-day has made me take), this is an amazing poem (and one for my favorite stories list!), so please continue to write! ^.^

~~Say You'll Remember

YAY! I think it's cool! YAY!!!!!!!!
~Christina =)

You end your poems very well, and I think it's that which gives them their oomph. Your poem is abstract, but I think all poetry should be. The sort of reminds me of E.L. Cummings, except that he's much more depressing. Wonderful job.
~Toireasa

beautiful poem. u have a very good sense of rhyme- it never sounds mechanical in this poem. it really flows quite naturally. i enjoyed reading this!

OOOHH!!! I LIKE!!! *yells muchly about how absolutely, positively STUNNING this Windsong is* Seriously. It's like... wow. WOW. I think I'm turning into a snake, my jaw keeps falling to the floor so much. Go send it off to a magazine like Teen Ink or something. That's an order!
Also, thanks for your review of "Moons." I have to admit, it isn't my best work, and yes, it is weird (I'm glad to be welcomed to the club, BTW!); but it was written under duress, with a time restraint, so it wasn't my best. I was also on a Rurouni Kenshin high (you ever seen that anime? Good stuff. Kenshin is absolutely adorable), so if you go look at a pic of Kenshin, that's what the guy char in it looks like. Down to the last... scar. *laugh*
You should go read "Grass." As I've said, it's by Carl Sandburg. Go... I dunno. I think it ought to have passed into public domain by now, but you should be able to find it on the web somewhere.
Nah, it's all right that you didn't see the personality-reuse in "Ending?" since it was really bad of me to put in that comment at the end. Not everyone has read Card Zero; you weren't being stupid, I was being stupid, because I was the one who put in all the hints that I made sure didn't directly point to them.
You reuse chars as well? *grin* Neato! I was afraid I was the only one who did that!
BTW, if you go to my website and into Misc, you can find a fair amount of other stuff that's not posted on FFN - just remember to leave a message in the guestbook! ^_~

Again, beautiful imagery! Your poetry is the kind I could paint to. There are an endless number of meanings that could be pulled from this poem. I'm guessing each person might have their own interpretation, which makes things extra fun! =)

Wow! I was smiling the whole time I read this poem, very fun and intricate. That was a wonderfully fun piece to read. This was full of voice and a weaving feeling. I hope to read more like this one. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!

Kat

I loved it, as all of your other stuff! It's really good! I like how it could have several meanings depending on how you look at it, because that adds to the mystery of the poetry. Please please please keep posting! Thank you soooo much for posting!
~*~Kiayla~*~

Hey Moon! It's me again - sorry that I haven't been on for so long! Anyway, I thought this poem was pretty good - the rhyming almost made it "cute"...It obviously had deeper meanings, and I liked it. It turned out pretty well for an experiment!

Wow! youre good!!!!!!!!!

^_^ I like this one too! the willow-thingys are little blinking lights that go blink blink blink! ^_^ I think you did good on this one too

Really, really nice. Yeah, I guess it would fit in the category of "Nightsong". Keep writing, I'd love to see more.~CT

wow, this wuz totally awesome, i dunno quite wut u wanted, but this is how i c it:
u love this person, but u could just take the safe rout and never talk 2 them, or just b their friend. then, u just can't help it, u go off and tell them, or u picture it but u never really can.

i dunno, i'm sorta narrow minded.