i would have to say this was quite good

hey i've never heard the song everyone before but this is really good, i liked how you seemed to get the full understanding of this addiction down in poem. how you would think people would laugh at u if the found out the reason, how you just want answers, and everything inbetween. alot of people don't relize what's going through peoples head's when they do things like this and i think that you've captured all the emotions very accutally. thank you for making a poem that was worth my time to read. _

wow -very strong images. Excellent use of words and rhyming. So relatable.

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More depressing poems! Yay! Go you!

very good i liked it im kinda into this kind of poetry at the mo *wonder why* well done

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another soul bleeds depression...

good, is all i can say

nicely done. angsty's always a good thing.:D

That was good D