Sometimes the summer isn't so bad. I'm glad you're posting your work again; I've always loved reading your poetry.

Once again, a work of wonder. You're rolling out tranquility as fast as networks can produce reality tv. ^^ Compliments of course.-Cindy Moon *)

I like it alot. Its really well written. I couldn't change anything. Keep up the good writing.

hey, its john again
im new to this and dont quite get the format, but ya, help me out
if your not busy, im me at hksjohny on aim
thats it
pax

whats up james, its john. just checking out the poetry. im lovin it too.
pax

Whee! Standing tears...xD You gave life to the little droplets! And in such a spexily-creative-I-want-to-glomp kind of way!! Auugh! The poetic-ness! It's just too much! *cowers*
-Arii xD

Wow... standing tears, that's a pretty good metaphor. I'm gonna use it from now on, no just kidding. You've always got your way around with Imagery... and your style hasn't failed through this poem. Love the rhymescheme.. it relaly flows as well. *Sigh* that's how I feel right now... no, it's not emotioanl stress, it's school stress. I'm gonna break lol.
Good job!

Something so simple transfigured into something so complexingly beautiful.
^^ Me like lots!
-Cindy Moon *)

Hope is a dangerous thing indeed, will it betray you to your death? I sure hope not, where else am I to find optimistic poems such as these written by you? -sarcasm taking over me-
I love the format, you take the reader from the first few lines from this great definition of hope just to degrade it down to reality, the small flicker of light that it is. ^^ So moving... hmm something tells me I shouldn't be so happy about a topic so angst like. Anyways, I quite enjoyed it despite the fact I disagree with it(as well as the quote I had placed at the beginning of my review) Hm Happy Holidays!
-Cindy Moon *) Keep writing! Your work touched people

Hahah, I was thinking "Oh, it's an optimistic poem" when I read the title, but it's not really huh? It's rolling up, and then down, and then up again, and down. It's a fairly unique composition you've chosen.
*sigh* that's how I felt yesterday... Just dead, hopeless... Mainly because my math grade sucks, but you know...
I also liked the allusion to the previous poem you had at the bottom. "Racing on." *Sigh* and the imagery's great too. Even though it's not a specific sight, it lets your mind wander away... You can imagine practically anything.

ah!! I love this poem. Hahah, i love all of them, it doesn't matter, but I like this one especially... I can't relate to it more lol. It's scary to think how quickly life is rushing passed you. Before you know it, it's all going to be gone... sad huh..

*Snif, sniff* So pretty!! ^_^ You write awesome romantic stuffs, Fuuma. Kya! *glomps*

-Ari aka Terra-cha

;_; How sad! Aie...so many tears, too much sadness. >< Beautiful, emotional work.

~Ari aka Terra-cha

Suspended in our haste,
We just live to slowly watse
Away.
We are so busy, the world we pass
Stop and make the music last.
If we don't give time a chance.
We will move to a flightless dance.
^^ you have inspired me. Thank you
-Cindy Moon *)

Personification with the sunset, or perhaps its a metaphor for someone!
Your work never ceases to amaze me.