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Reviews For: Ribbons
someoneimportant 2002-11-19 . chapter 1
good, but line 3 has 7 syllables, should have 5
Keep it 100 2002-11-19 . chapter 1
Cool. Something is a little wrong with the way the text is appearing, though.


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