WRITTEN LIKE A TRUE POET, BUT WAS IT DONE?

this poem was'soul-touching'. it gives some insigt to a trapped prisoner

yeah... friends commenting on good moods make them vanish, ya know? still, beautiful poem with a dark meaning

ooooo I like this. Very..I dunno...emotional....And I don't know why, But I forgot to say thank you a looooong time ago cuz you said you liked my penname and Im like, "ill tel her thanks" but I have memory lapse...hehe

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I loved the end, it was what made the biggest impact, ‘Those drops of blood should feel lucky
for having finally escaped the prison
that encloses my body.’
I feel inspired, gah, I’m too lazy to write a poem… =_=

Yet another smashing piece of work. Poetry is so hard to write, and you write it so well. Good poetry is really hard to find these days, but you have a lot of talent, and really a way with words. I'm glad you can share yourself in this way. It's cathartic for you, but also for anyone who reads it. Thanks. Awesome work. I don't know what your friends could have said, but I think it was very nicely done.

Hang on in there, Redrum. You're not alone while you've got the world beyond the crystal wall. It's what kept me alive in the darkest hours.

There's someone out there beyond the crystal wall who won't ever reject you or laugh at you. You've just gotta call them.

Call me crazy, call me delusional, but maybe what you should do is dig up a picture of your favourite character from video game or TV show or book and talk to him/her. It might just help.

E-mail me if you want. I'm here to talk if you ever need a shoulder to cry on. I have my bad times too...but maybe we can help each other out.

Wow. Excellent though kinda creepy. The Shining was an awesome movie (but the mini series was scarier). Okay. Hmmm, this sounds very angsty. Good work, keep writing (if you want check out my Whips of Fire).

that was the best poem i have read yet. good job.

~GeN!