Line five, stanza one: "aniticipating" should be "anticipating." Things like this take away from a piece.

Other than that--this poem has been written before, if you know what I mean.

sad and beautiful at the same time...a real work of art.

Nice! I like this! I would have reviewed this sooner, but I thought I'd already read it. ^^0 Heh heh... AnYwAy, I hope you post more up soon! Keep writing! ^_^

Great! It's so powerful! Love it!!! ^.^

This was sad, but very good.

I like it...