God, this was beautiful, and very Wagnerian! I don't know how you make your poems so energenic; my poems are immature and lame, while your poems are great masterpieces! This was well written, such as the rest of your work is as well!

*The Mighty Sisto*

P.S.: I'm writing a story in the Historical section called, "Mutter und Kind" It should be up before January 1st, incompleted of course because it will have multiple chapters. I hope you take the time to look at my work, as you have in the past. I will be honored to have you read my story.

neitzsche.

this is so very neitzsche it's almost funny. but gorgeous.

oh... wow...

im struck dumb by this poem, and my head bends in silence. it is great

the contrast!

it is like olives and tuna- at first you think it quite horrid, but then you put them together and it is actually quite wonderful indeed.

the two can be either nice alone or oft times overbearing. but when put together! it is recitative! it is, in fact, wagner.

Oooh, I love the images and the way this poem was written. Nice job, keep it

*stares in awe* Wow. That was...beyond great. There are no words for this masterpiece. I feel like crying, it was so good. Wow.

Deep. Nice imagrey. It gives a sense of lonelyness to I the reader. Nice.

**The Phantom of Whispers**