Hola! What a pretty poem. I wish we got to write poems in my classes. Anywho, love it, off to read something else by you!

Not quite what i was expecting from the title, but still quite nice. the words "firey unicorn" seem to stir in me more feelings of passion and things, rather than (if you'll excuse the expression, i'm really NOT trying to flame you or anything, just trying to add other stuff in my review rather than 'good job'. hey, maybe i'll even inspire you! ^^) fluff and rainbows and flowers... but that stuff is nice too ^^

I love the imagery here. You're very imaginative =)

That's pretty! I think it's really effective, how you used short sentences on each lines to either describe something different, or to add to the previous line. It flows nicely and paints a vivid picture, too. ^.^ I hope you'll write more poems!

This is a great poem! Reminds me of a song. ^_~ Maybe you've heard it before! Great poem, post another one soon!