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| virginia giselle 2005-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseThanks for the review. (: And I love this story. The style, the discriptions. It's wonderful. (: |
| Shinu-Neko 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's cute! ^_^ |
| Taylor-Ame 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's so simple and descriptive and emotive. It brings back memories. I like it very, very much. |
| apathyburger 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this- very free form, association. Perhaps add more? |
| PunkGretchen 2003-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseSeems like one of my old relationships. Good job Pedro :) |
| Liebe Sasa 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, thats just... Gorgious. I love it. -Mizery Rose |
| SchizoAuthoress 2003-01-04 ch 1, | abuseI just wanted something to read, so I was checking out my reviews and clicked on the link to your profile...Why did you make me CRY?! Just kidding, I'm not mad or anything. That was great!! ~~Schiz |
| Aezy 2002-12-28 ch 1, | abuseWow! Thats very good writing....I like! *clicks* onto the favourites it goes! Happy New Year! Aezy |
| PaperLanterns 2002-12-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, i really liked reading that. It wasn't really sad, but i ended up crying anyways. It was full of details that really only girlfriends recognize of thier boyfriends, and that's what really made it come together. Very original and emotional piece. |
| wingless 2002-12-15 ch 1, | abusei love the details the fairy wings - the shirtails this is really true. the regretful feeling i know what you mean |
| communist daughter 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abusethat is SO sweet and SO sad - and definitely very well-written. kudos on an orginal and bittersweet idea. |
| Bienfoy 2002-11-30 ch 1, | abuseahh i wanna know what happened!they broke up?...aww this is so good, makes me think of my exboyfriend. really very well written, you put some great usages of emotion in there. |
| AriadneEthereal 2002-11-20 ch 1, | abuseReally well written. I got really sad in the middle, but then it all worked out, which was good! Will there be more? |