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| Lin Winter 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseNice wording. It had alot of emotion in it. |
| BrittneyAnna 2003-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI don't really know what to say to that. I understand what it means. But i really don't know what to say except it seemed to have a lot of anger. But it was still good. |
| Chavi West-Wind 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abusewhoa...i don't understand it, but the emotion in it is evident. good work! =^.^= |
| dupidnavagog 2002-11-23 ch 1, | abuseYour experience mirrors what lots of "troubled youths" have gone through before you. Many of these people are now adults, but harbor very bitter feelings toward these useless people. You know, a lot of these guys are more borken up than you and I, and really just need to fix themselves first. Well done. Like the rawness of it. |
| MoshiMoshiQueen 2002-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it, its like my poem. Those doctors don't know any thing. They think that they can 'know' what you feel, how 'your life' is and what you are 'going threw'. **. You understand what I go threw. I love the part where you said, 'It's power play; I've already overcome you.' Nice wording. Thanks for your reviews, it's nice to know someone knows what I go threw. |