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Tis storie wiwly sux! tak it off ef u no wats good for u. If u dont whant us to giv u bad reviews, then stop righting those reviews critisizing other people's stories. Some people have a disability in writing and reading like dislexia, so maybe you can respect people more. That is all my friends and I haf to say. (Just incase you want to know, I know I'm spelling these things wrong, but I'm doing it on purpose, so take more consideration into other's stories.)

Very nice... The one thing I find weird is that you seem to be using some form of rhyming then you use prodigy/jealousy. If you sing the words a certain way they rhyme, but otherwise... o.O The chorus is very awesome. fight the power/let it be... I really agree. I like songs that talk about that stuff (pennywise - ** authority) but i like that idea more.

Pretty good. I really like the chorous. Nice job

-Jessie