Lol that is a strange topic! ARGH my classes are no fun at all! ANywho, love it, it is really great even for just a little class excersize!

Neat. The cutting off of the lines makes it seem like the person is gasping for air, their thoughts or words slipping away as is their life...
O.o now i'm getting morbid too, not that it's really dark or anything, which is nice.

lol that was pretty funny

XD You're right, that was rather morbid, and I feel a little bad for giggling at such a serious topic. ^~;; *grins* But it's really good! I liked it! ^.^ Hmm, it sounds like someone who is running out of air is actually talking/thinking. I like this! *nodnod*