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| Molly-Pegasus 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseLol that is a strange topic! ARGH my classes are no fun at all! ANywho, love it, it is really great even for just a little class excersize! |
| Windswift 2003-04-24 ch 1, | abuseNeat. The cutting off of the lines makes it seem like the person is gasping for air, their thoughts or words slipping away as is their life... O.o now i'm getting morbid too, not that it's really dark or anything, which is nice. |
| MoonsWynterWolf 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuselol that was pretty funny |
| Terra-fying 2002-12-03 ch 1, | abuseXD You're right, that was rather morbid, and I feel a little bad for giggling at such a serious topic. ^~;; *grins* But it's really good! I liked it! ^.^ Hmm, it sounds like someone who is running out of air is actually talking/thinking. I like this! *nodnod* |