I reread this chapter again more carefully this time. I love it. Andrea is really starting to break down. DO you know how much you have left for this story? Update soon. I really really loved it.

YEAH!! Quick review got a final in a couple minutes...jUst wanted to say YEAH! I'm so happy you finally updated...ttyl!

So when is this going to get updated? Contradictions is by far my favorite story here at fictionpress.com...I've been into it since the beginning and it just kills me to wait forever for the next chapter...so please, save a life, update your story! LOL

Oh my! I didn't even know that you had updated over a month ago. I think, that after a while, I kind of just gave up hope. I think some of my own readers are starting to do that too, because I just don't know what to write anymore. Anyway, back to your story..."You say arrogant, I say confident." I just loved that line. And, I love the infiltration of Darcy references too. Man, I love that book; I love the movie too. I can't to have Andria "fall for him (meaning Darcy and Jeremy both) eventually". Your stories are really good, and it makes me sad that not enough people review as they should. By the way, I have a question. Is the line, "Maybe you should let them take it from here. Focus on your own life for now Abs," supposed to be some kind of foreshadowing of Mark's intentions with Abby. I still think that the pair could make an awesome spinoff story. Anyway, keep the writing coming. Now if only I followed my own advice...
~MsQTpa2T

It's still kind of sweet, not kate seems to have a personality. I'm interested to see how it'll turn out because I thought it was going to be really predictable..but it's not. which is a good thing :) ps. could you r&r mine if you have time? thanks.

aw. sweetness lol. btw - good chapter length. blah, pointless review. nice ending to the chapter btw.

interesting. can't believe she didn't notice about pyjamas..your main character's stupid. anyhow, this is interesting. well written :)

aha. interesting. got a little boring with the friends on at her in .. 3 places wasnt it? geh.

oh dear.. just remember they're 16. anyhow. how do you pronounce 'Jer' is it like j-air? i guess.. well descriptions are in, yay. I'll just go for imagining someone with diffused sort of hair else I end up with an image of someone looking like a frizzy-haired bat. anyhways.

I don't remember seeing a description of Jeremy. Please! His view some time! Oh, and how old are they?

Interesting although I'd still like to see a his POV but the change to 3rd was interesting for a while. How did abby guess? That seemed unreal.

I think a Jeremy perspective would be good. I wasn't going to say that but .. um..yeah. Isn't it kind of obvious if he's on the other end of the sofa and sort of .. swoops at her. I'd have expected her to think he was being annoying and try and hit him .. or something. Anyhow. *reads on* (god she's stupid).

It's definately warmer. They don't seem like mortal enemies moe like people that are forced to spend time wiht each other and just really dislike each other. I really like this chapter in comparison - before I didn't like it so much but this really starts selling it:)

I found it odd that it starts with the two making cobntact in an almost friendly way, they don't seem to have a reason to fight and don't seem to that badly. Can't believe she was that stupid btw. It's intruiging but sounds like it'll be a short story. It's .. intruiging.

Wow. I was so confused as to what this story was when I got the little author alert in my e-mail box. I was like, What story is this? Heh heh. But I figured things out. I can totally sypmathize with the AP testing. In fact, I have a test tomorrow and a test on Tuesday (upcoming!) agh! So it's bad. I should be studying, so I'll go. Just know that I love this story and would hate to see another prologued absence on your part (ie update! heh hehh)