Just so happens to be that time of a 3 day weekend night where I have nothing to do but surf the web, and I stumble again onto your cluster of poems.

This one has great imagery. I can almost remember a time in my life when I could imagine myself doing this; it was exactly the same as it was in the poem. I don't know how the hell you managed to pull that memory out of my mind, but, after all, you are the omniscient Ice Hawk.

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Insane Freak Always,

Umi.

P.S. I'll beat you next time!

hmm... wow, i like the imagery. Sort of a spontaneous feeling... but that's how most poems are written anyway. Good job. It's so... flowy... I have to learn from you lol.

the melancholy mood fits perfectly.

The azul sky that reflects upon the waters

Crash upon the shores.

The clouds fall upon the jaggeds rocks that lie below.

The sun no longer exists

And still I read your dang good poetry wishing i can amount up to your talent!

Well how has it been for you?

I see your writing has been improving

great stuff you have...

me waiting for that X-mas gift... come to think of it yours will be published soon enough

tahtah for nows