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Reviews For: Shades of Darkness

Sarrasanne
2005-10-29
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds like something from a book about like - heaven and hell and the middle ages and - etc. like mypaintedportrait, the stentences take you by surprise - i like the way this is written.

luv Isi
Melzy k
2002-12-09
ch 1,
abuseMy Father commited suicide, my mum tried and my wrists are the criss cross scars of attempts to cry out for the help I want. I want hospital I want a shrink but no one realises what I do to myself I cut my wrists shallowly so that people see I have feelings that need talked about but no one realises that the cat i say scratched them is one of the calmest animals about I WANT HELP
Lornyl Mahtsae
2002-12-06
ch 1,
abusewow, I once had a friend who tried to razor her wrists, but she didn't cut deep anough, thank god. I love deep poetry like this.

PS: You remember the suggestion you made for my poem "The Plagiarist"? well, I followed trough with it, although that was when you were stll GeminiLady!
~Aislinn
TheSisterSpoonBandits
2002-12-06
ch 1,
abusehiya...very serious point..but well made

~us
Needa S
2002-12-02
ch 1,
abuseThere is a light on the other side of the tunnel. Awesome piece! Well wishes to your friend! Keep writing and thanks for your reviews.
Tearful Spider
2002-11-24
ch 1,
abuseYou reviewed to my poem so I went to read yours. I understand what the poems saying because thats how I feel. Tell your friend that I understand her pain and that I hope she becomes well soon.

~Spider
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