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| Sarrasanne 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds like something from a book about like - heaven and hell and the middle ages and - etc. like mypaintedportrait, the stentences take you by surprise - i like the way this is written. luv Isi |
| Melzy k 2002-12-09 ch 1, | abuseMy Father commited suicide, my mum tried and my wrists are the criss cross scars of attempts to cry out for the help I want. I want hospital I want a shrink but no one realises what I do to myself I cut my wrists shallowly so that people see I have feelings that need talked about but no one realises that the cat i say scratched them is one of the calmest animals about I WANT HELP |
| Lornyl Mahtsae 2002-12-06 ch 1, | abusewow, I once had a friend who tried to razor her wrists, but she didn't cut deep anough, thank god. I love deep poetry like this. PS: You remember the suggestion you made for my poem "The Plagiarist"? well, I followed trough with it, although that was when you were stll GeminiLady! ~Aislinn |
| TheSisterSpoonBandits 2002-12-06 ch 1, | abusehiya...very serious point..but well made ~us |
| Needa S 2002-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThere is a light on the other side of the tunnel. Awesome piece! Well wishes to your friend! Keep writing and thanks for your reviews. |
| Tearful Spider 2002-11-24 ch 1, | abuseYou reviewed to my poem so I went to read yours. I understand what the poems saying because thats how I feel. Tell your friend that I understand her pain and that I hope she becomes well soon. ~Spider |