Oh, I like, I like!

It's always nice to see a MALE angsting over a broken heart, most of the times it's the chicas who do that. (Whoa, since when I say chicas? It's too late at night.) And I REALLY liked that the character decided to move on with his life. Kudos.

Wowza! That was good Steph! An interesting perspective. I've not read too many like this!

Heartbreaking but very good expression; I can almost see a castle in the distance. :)

very nice poem
powerful words