|Reviews for THE DEFINATION OF LIFE|
| Star of the Sea 11/24/02 . chapter 1
I liked it, but the ending was left a bit hanging...like I feel like there was more to say. You have a very nice style and a common thread among the poems of yours that I have read.
(note: you may want to double check grammar on your submissions. little mistakes have a tendency to draw away from what you are saying.)
Keep up the good work!