Yay, finally getting round to review this properly on here. Aerm, yeah, characterisation works fantastically well, and I've said before that I like your style. I think, if you work at it and hide Tony somewhere for a couple of days, you can *really* scare your housemates. :-)

Elmy

As a housemate of Paul's, the story is both very funny and (with the exception of Tony being eaten alive) quite true to life. The characteristics of each of us, though humourously exagerated are accurately portrayed. An excellent short story.

^^ That's pretty good. *interested in this competition..* Is there gonna be more?