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Reviews For: Unconcerned Housemates
Elmyra 2002-12-24 . chapter 1
Yay, finally getting round to review this properly on here. Aerm, yeah, characterisation works fantastically well, and I've said before that I like your style. I think, if you work at it and hide Tony somewhere for a couple of days, you can *really* scare your housemates. :-)

Elmy
Natalie 2002-12-14 . chapter 1
As a housemate of Paul's, the story is both very funny and (with the exception of Tony being eaten alive) quite true to life. The characteristics of each of us, though humourously exagerated are accurately portrayed. An excellent short story.
Sacha B. Sylver 2002-12-04 . chapter 1
^^ That's pretty good. *interested in this competition..* Is there gonna be more?
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