aBSOLUTELY LOVELY. i ENJOYED THIS IMMENSLEY. aND i CAN'T SEE WHAT i'M TYPING. oDD... O.o; aNYWAYS, i'LL BE SURE TO CHECK OUT YOUR OTHER WORKS!

That was cool, not as many plot twists as I like in a story, it WAS pretty predictable throughout, but that didn't stop me from reading a great story. I look forward to more of your writing.

I haven't found ANY stories on this whole damn website that comes close to that yet!! It took me over two hours to read the whole thing but it was so worth it I couldn't stop!! I hope you write some more Abi because that was the BEST!!!! :)

i love it! i hope youwrite some more, your really good. :>

See abi? They all agree with me. It's GREAT!!!! Now write that sequel we talked about or there will be hell to pay!!!! Or not. It's up to you.

~Bunny ^.~

this is a great story! I couldn't do anything till I had finished it! great idea!

I really loved this story. I have always loved fairy tales, and your story is a wonderful modern one. I think the ending was a nice touch. Great Job!

Awesome story!!! Seriously!