What an interesting topic, Namir. Quite intently different then anything else I've seen on this site. oO The innocence is steadily pleasing to the senses, and I'm glad it was you who conveyed it through your poem. Excellent job!

loserz. ;)

This has got to be one of the first poems I've read that has something to do with innocence...and I think I like it.(Gotta hate that old age,eh?)

It sounds like a scene from South Park - the boys get out of school and there's snow everywhere. Weird poem, but good. I like! _