And all lead to infinety. I like it, very good, is it just me or am I catching some reincarnation themes to?

very cool and ihope you get to write more on it

*shrugs shoulders* Okay, not bad. Not great, but not bad. No figurative language to comment on, really.

Somehow lacks the punch of the other poem of yours I've read. There's nothing about it that really stands out, makes it different from the many other poems that have been written with the same thought and virtually the same layout. 'The endless burning cycle' was a good line, though.

Short but sweet, a poem about life & death which is cheerful, very good

Awesome. Heheh the summary's cute, but I like the poem better...yeah. God Bless