Cute. Somewhat Childish, but cute. )

Dude, that's crazy! I can't rhyme, and I envy people who can.

I can identify with this poem so well... My dreams are much like it. But the monsters are my dad... Flitting in my life-like dreams and taking his place there, where I know he shouldn't be, as he's dead... but these dreams make me wish he was back, and strain my heart towards what can never be...

heheheh... gay! yes, i'm horrible... like this one! oh, i like reading your poems and stuff... see?

baibaiyukie

Okay, now you have a Joel Silverstein feel to your poems. Great work for kid's poetry. Nothing more to say.

How adorable. And man, those monster names sure are a mouthful... I wonder how a mom of more than, oh, two children, would call all her kids to supper? Surely the food would be cold by the time all those syllables worked their way out of her mouth (or mouths!)...

lol humorous... i used to be scared of monsters...

Very, very adorable! It manages to stay cute while still standing as intellectual as well-quite a feat to accomplish, I must say!

Starlight Rain

I like this. It makes me think of when I was a child (those many years ago). Oh by the way, your bio said you are a Were. Way cool. I find it really hard to find other Were's. People usaly just think I'm weird or something.

Lol! This was adorable . . . the monster names were (of course) the best part!

Great fun, do you get nightmares?, hope not, is that why you're always OL at 4am :)

Awwww...*squeals* Thank you so much! Isn't rhyming stuff fun? *kicks herself* I gotta get going and write some more! _ Thank you so much for what you said! *KG

Wow I thought this was excellent! I go through similar spurts of rhyming ingenious too and I love to write rhyming poetry, though lately I’ve been writing non-rhyming ones. Anyway, that’s way off track - I loved this poem because the tone was light, yet when those dreams take place you usually think they are real and feel scared. You described all those emotions wonderfully in rhyme, and the words flowed so easily. Write on!