I really love your story but i can't stand the fact you have to reply to your reviews on your story could you not do that it makes me disappointed when i look at the scroll bar and get really happy that there is that big amout of story to realise that is not story but review statements :( really like your story and I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER HURRY! :P

Best story yet but it is 2009 and it has been 5 years please finish soon

this can't end here! it is a wonderful story! please cont'd!

I am really starting to like stories like this I love this story man I cant wait to read more of it!
up date soon :D

This is delightful so far, and I am quite disappointed that it seems to be abandoned. In fact, it would appear that you haven't been on the site in a long time.

Which is too bad, but not a waste so long as you're still writing somewhere. Well, should you ever return to this story, I'll be quite interested in reading more.

And yes.

need next chapter

this is like my second review on this site. i only did it cause i want u to add chapters faster. i have a friend thats a really good writer but she wont do anything with her storys. i have to sneak and pay her brother to give me the storys. i think i m going to put them up or something

I think she should ask him what it is like to dream and then he be all like why then she's like race you to there or whatever. & then they like kiss and it is like a. 'dream' so when they open their eyes they both have been transported to modern day America. Then like she can't figure out how to get back & bring him cuz when they kiss it doesn't work. Then she like explains everything to him & then when they get back it is HER suitor dude that kills him becuz of her & tldat has been the secret the whole time, a jealous boyfriend, no one knew about her so that's why it never was solved! I am so awesome. Pleez try to do something along these lines cuz I love this story and stuff.

The story you got here is amazing! If only you would ever finish it...

Man , I realy wish you would do more on this. There's a King TUt exhibit near my home, and everytime I think of King Tut I remember this story. So I just came back here and reread it. it's so good- such an intriguing plot. I really want to know what happens next...is there any way you'd ever finish it?

This is a VERY, VERY good story!
I like the idea, so very creative!
You haven't updated in years! Please, UPDATEE!
You're killing your fans out there!
OMG.
I love the suspense.
And the romance.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I'm captivated!
Love,
SP

this is really good! i wonder what the girl chooses in the end.. the boy, or to let him die.. hm... xD

I don't know if anyone has said this yet but I read in a book (Akhenaten: Dweller in the Truth) that said that Akhenaten carved the statue himself and took out the left eye when Nefertiti left him because... he was sad.

Or somethin' like that.

Great story :)

aww i kinda wanna read more but there is none!! update update, please update? this is a great story so far, i can't for the life of me work out why it stops here! ~ Alenor

Oh, come on you must continue this. I absolutely love this story. I've always been intrigued by the story of King Tut. As many are I'm sure. But I always wondered who he was as a person. He was but a young man ruling, but despite being king what were his interests and his loves.
This story has drawn me in with a realistic view of King Tut and how he very well could have been like.
Please update, I know how it is. You think of a great story and then you think of others which you only put a few chaps. And then of course ordinary life coming in, reality strikes and then other things start to pale in comparison of what you want to do and are instead replaced with what you need to do. And so you wait till you are at your witts end and your mind needs unloading when you start writing again.
so, yeah...sorry for rambling but I think you get my point.