The sad thing is, this is so true :( Nice job though!

this is really good, if this is true,m i can't really say anything you don't already know, otherwise, great job, keep it up!

pretty expressive and deals with a really relevant experiance and type of feelings

That is actully a really cool poem probably only because something like that kinda happened to me. But it's wicked brillant keep writing laters!!!

~Sexy Sammy
Love, Luck, and Lollypops :)

nice poem. i was expecting it to be more graphic fuguring that its one of your stories were talking about. but it was nice all the same