you say you can't write verse...yet this is some of the most true and well-written prose i've read. seriously, your writing is veritable ear-candy, it begs to be read. i think beautiful prose should be considered poetry. ho hum, oh well.
and yup...i live in new jersey. damned domestication. damned corporate america. I'm movin' to iceland! wahoo!

Whoa. This is really really good. It touched me and was so incredibly true...wow. Thats all I can say. Keep it up, its an excellent angst fic it really conveys your feelings! Good job!
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