 SweetGrape 2002-11-26 . chapter 1OK rhymes and flow.
Interesting concept summed up at the end. Very strong and descriptive, sorrowful 'Nothing is as it seems', lonely 'I am all alone', cold 'Death is coming, anger/frustration 'hate living a lie', relief 'let out a sigh'.
2nd last stanza notes how people may feel guilty or how will they feel about someone's death, and the last stanza is like a final breath of relief. |