It took me a while to read through all this story but I got to say, I really enjoy it. One of these days I'll read you're other two.

I finished it! I loved it! Sigh... So nice...

I have just read the the first and second chapter. I like how your doing the whole thing. Did you write the whole thing is sixth grade? it's very good. Although i still like Zero Dragon a bit better. Interesting names in this story. You made it way fun to read, and it was fun trying to figure out how to pronounce your people's names. By the way thank you a lot for your review. I will have to do some serious editing, you're right of course. You noticed what i could not. I'm sorry you don't especially like cats, but i like dogs too. In fact in chapter 4 we meet a fairly major character ,well characters, i suppose. We only see them for two chapters, but in my sequel to this story they'll play a fairly major part. And i think you will like them quite a bit. It should be up, and i know you have a lot to do, but fictionpress has been acting up lately with me so if if you can't access chapter 3 or 4 just tell me. E-mail or by review it doesn't matter. And just to let you know i'm not the best a grammar but i'm getting better thanks for pointing it out to me.
--Belle the Shadow-Cat

hahaha, reading this again- i agree with Anime Authoress holy crap this is super long. This time it took me about an hour to read it, and in that time i saw a wonderfull way with words, great descrpitions, no grammer/spelling mistakes *no surprise* and ,well a great story all in all! ^_^ I hope you continue writing as good as this! ~*~IceAngel~*~
p.s.- i e-mailed you about the editing thing like you wanted. ~_^! I know that this review isn't nearly as long as yours but i hope you get the message anyway. ^_^ Awesome job.

holy crap this is long! It just keeps going and going and going and going! I read part of the first part but i just can't read it all on the net, i'll have to save it and get back to ya with a better review later! Man are you a talented writer! You just flow everything so gracefully! I love all you writings! Yeah, i don't have what you do though. I've only been writing for a year or even less anyways. So not much practice on my part.

I'm not feeling very high of myself lately anyhow. I mean i've gotten great reviews for my stories, don't get me wrong, but my esteme has taken a low blow. My teacher for my Creative Writing class says that my work is weak. I told her i wrote books at home, and she thinks i am lying! She said if i wrote books, then the class writings wouldn't be so weak! It's like, you old hag you give us 15 minutes to come up with a plot out of a choice of three different sentences you give us! How is it suppose to be professional! I can't even finish the book in 15 minutes! I told her my dream was to become an author, and she said that i wouldn't get any publications! I am not even lying! She said i am a faliure as an author!

Woah, i had to get that off my chest! But, yeah, if my teacher read your works, she would fall over dead! Hmm...maybe this could work to my advantage. Yeah, i'll be like, read this. And then she would fall over dead...bam! No more teacher trouble! Lol!

I'll be back!

Allapeace,

Anime Authoress Heku Binsentsu

hey cool story!

p.s. i was reading tree-kats reviews to see if everyone liked them and i saw your Zero Dragon website so i went in! VERY COOL! I loved your pictures.your forgot me! ^_^ just kidding, i'm one of your lesser reviewers. *i did that to make you laugh* ^_^ ^_^! Plz continue writing your storys are unbeliveabl! ~*~IceAngel~*~ thank-you for reving my story!!

Hey,
yeah, no problem for reviewing i'm glad to do it! Your very good at writing!
~*~IceAngel~*~
p.s. thank-you for reviewing mine!!

Oh-My-GOSH! Do ya know how long it took me to read it?? 30 minutes! Whoa.

Comments- Hey it may be long but it's very well written, great characters (I liked Kenji the most, even though he died), nice format,- your a VERY talented writer!

Hai, i do think you should continue writing! It's a GREAT story! By the way, Very infomative in the Glossary. ^_^ hope ya write more! ~*~IceAngel~*~

ooo, i have only read the prologue, but thats really good...and sad at the same time...poor Nicolai...thats sad. I'm going to read more when i get the time...which is when i get out of school, lol. I'd have to say you don't cease to amaze me with your writting abilities. It try, but one day my heart is in it, and the other when i start to finish the chapter, i just isn't...and so it gets bad. If you like you should read my book "Shooting Star", its a DBZ romance, but my most popular! Love the story as far as i have read it! I love how you ended the prologue! oooo....can't wait to get out of school and read the rest!

come on guys, this is not a debate room on who's got the longest stuff... i mean, no big deal right? a story doesn't have to be very long to be good, neither is it always true that a short story cannot be at all understandable and moving in the first place. :-)



"ETERNAL FINALE" http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1086468

"ZERO DRAGON" (my better story!)
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1027750

Read them not because they're long but because i've worked so hard for them!

Peace guys... don't bombard me with e-mails!

heh you're both wrong. the longest (i've seen so far) is by Moirasfate called "Fate's End" with 80 chapters and it's in THIS section of original anime/manga...

This is good. :D But, I do believe the longest (or atleast in the TOP 3 of longest) is in the 'Bastard' section. I believe it has 68 Chapters.

to the person whose review appears above this message:

THANK YOU FOR BEING MY FIRST REVIEWER!

Please visit my other fiction. It's better than Eternal Finale. I'll appreciate it very much.
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1027750

E-mail me hlarucea@hotmail.com