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lilylupin7 2006-07-17 ch 9,	I'm utterly jealous of your fabulous plots. More please
SwitchVale 2006-05-20 ch 9,	The beginning was a little creppy, but I really like the way the plot is developing in this story. Now I can't wait to see what happens on their first mission!
Cherise 2005-11-07 ch 8,	So...his family never wondered why their son never contacted them after so long? Did they even ask what he would be doing? And was Tahk in love with him before they took him, and that's why he wanted to be back together with him? (I'm really slow, so if that's in there somewhere, forgive me)
somethingsup 2005-07-27 ch 8,	Likin' it. More please! ^^
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-20 ch 8,	Ah, nice to hear that they gave him a bit more freedom around the place because it does seem semi-ridiculous to follow River everywhere after a year (especially in the shower. Ha. I doubt it would do them any good anymore.) Breaking necks. So lovely. Lol. God, I think if I was him I would’ve ** died or something if I had been in there for that long /without/ getting any sun. That’s just crazy, man. Poor babe. [“Go shower and change.”] This makes me grin because the first time I read it I thought ‘aww, they want him to be pretty for Tahk’ and yea…that’s it about that. Heh. BUT YAY. Tahk is back. That makes me (and no doubt the two of them) very happy. Aww. So much hugging and touching and pure cuteness, despite the bigger situation. I love how they’re so /close/ even though nothing has really happened between them. It’s goodness. [As long as he was with Tahk, he would be alright.] Such a sweet last line. So, yea, adored this chapter the most (of course) and I hope you continue again soon.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-20 ch 7,	God, what sucky was for him to end up ‘living’ and I put it like that because it doesn’t really seem like a life. Pretty creepy, actually, to have him always be watched, even if this part: [At one point, one had asked if he needed to jerk off and without River replying simply turned his back and said he wouldn’t look.] amused the out of me. Heh. Six months is a hella long time to just be doing something like that (much worse, I guess, that he didn’t get to see Tahk yet, you know?) A lab rat? Woah. Okay. So I guess life was (is?) way worse for Tahk than it is (was?) for River. [“Assassinate is the word, actually.”] Is it horrid that I find that whole idea really funny? Probably. Heh. Really loved this chapter. Now onto the next…
SatisfyAnEmptyInside 2005-07-20 ch 6,	I seem to be following the right stories lately. Lol. This is the…I don’t know how many it has been, but a lot…story that has updated with a few chapters before I catch it again. That makes me very, very happy (even if I will angst over having so many things to review now.) God, his dad really sucks, doesn’t he? Maybe the most out of all of them. Like therapy would really fix him, because it’s not like he’s as terribly off as they like to think he is. Or maybe he is, but I just don’t see it. Lol. Gah, and Parthenon, who isn’t bad but it feels like he’s just trying to guilt River into doing what they want him to do. I’d say it’s really good that he’s getting out of there now (and I am so skipping around. Heh.) At least they’re real CIA people this time or whatnot. Then again, not really since they said they’d chop Tahk into pieces if River didn’t go. Quite ** of them, but it’s expected. Loved this chapter, and I’m really interested in seeing where this story is going to go now. I promise to review the two next chapters soon.
SweetPseudonym 2005-07-20 ch 8,	Aww-this is turning out so beautifully! I really am loving it xD Tahk and River are so adorable together
animebam 2005-07-20 ch 8,	:o It's an updating miracle. Especially for this story that I've fallen in love with. xD -pats- I love the names you use. I'm not one for original names... I love wacky, cookoo names like you use. They're just so... cool. :o Anyway, I'm glad you updated this story more. It pretty much inspires me to update that quickly on my stories. Thing is, that'll never happen considering I don't even have a good idea on where I'm going witch every one of my stories. I know how to end them... I'm just bad at getting my characters to develop to get to that point. =D You're doing a good job so far. -tacklesglompsclings-
Chicken Ice Cream 2005-07-20 ch 8,	Wow! Holy crap, THREE updates in a row! The most I've ever done is two...i'm so jealous! The story's getting pretty interesting, I can't wait until we start finding out about what's really going on ^^
Pink Raine 2005-07-20 ch 8,	hey. whee this is a good story. good thing i put of reading it till this chap else i might have gone insane in between posts. so i would commit suicide if i had six older bros like that. sheesh. six. what i really like is the pacing of the evnts of this story. it's very good how it's not too slow and not too quick either.
subtleline 2005-07-19 ch 5,	squeal jump dance prance U have no idea how happy I am u updated this!! I have been waiting at the edge of my seat for this! U go River! Rebel baby! huggles River His family annoyed the hell outta me. Even Loire got on my nerves a bit. There is no way a family can b like that! there was genetic tampering I tell u! Though u r thr one writing so u would know now wouldn't u. Well, I'll just go back to my lil corner and wait for u to update this again. and THANKS!
Cookie Gestapo 2005-07-18 ch 3,	River is so adorable.
Cookie Gestapo 2005-07-18 ch 5,	Aww I hafta say I love River so much and I was so suprised when I saw that you had updated I sat and stared at my computer or nearly twenty minuets. This storie is so good and I could only wish that you would update more often. I definetly can't wait to see where this is all leading and how it all goes. You've got my attention try and keep it. I'm looking forward for more (and keep up the good work). -Cookie
ManIACjAcKaL 2005-07-18 ch 5,	:D:D:D:D oh... how exciting GO RIVER!! fangirls :3

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