Howdy, I've been meaning to review you and now I will!I like this. It seems to me that if I was a bit more clever I could read something deep into this ;-p. I especially liked the last line. It makes me think "how can you breathe when the ground is so close?". All around very well written.

whew...nice poem! great work!
it was nice how you describe ones freedom...i really liked it!
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wow that was really good. and i liked it a lot. Great job! And i would love your opinions on some of my writings.

You never let me read this! It's amazing! You're so talented. I'm envious. Keep up the mazing work and let me read it--I promise I will (eventually).