many kuddos! this series was hilarious!

Thou speaketh the truth.

he he he. I like it. Oh how the past haunts.

I loved it! So funny! roflol!

hahahahahahaha! that was hilaious! I can see my friends doing that... but yeah, that was great.

Another wonderful installment of the adventures of Jane and Sarah. It's starting to remind me of the adventures of the insane Griswolds . . . assuming and hoping that you like National Lampoon so it doesn't sound like I insulted you.

Good story!

I think you should write a continuous story of Jane and Sarah's adventures. I am sure it will be hilarious.

...wow..that was funny in a sad way.

Sarah and Jane just should stay away from each other, seriously!

I was cracking up when Sarah described Jane's driving...eyes closed, 75 mph...oy! I would have freaked out if it were my friend, although once I drove 95 mph with my sisters in the car...lucky they didn't tell on me!

Hahahaha! That was extremely entertaining! That sounds like something that would happen to me. Good job, it sounds exactly like how a teenager would tell it and everything! Wah! Good job!!

cool story! i absolutely liked it! the way it was written is really a "BRAVO!" for me...even i could never think of making this kind of story...woderful work! i really do love it!! keep up the good work!
[hey, hope you could read and review some of my stuff sometime]
great work!!
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Hey, i liked this short story. it was really good! Keep on writing. If you want you can check up my stories. My user is teenchik43. buh bai

That was awesome! I absolutely love your writing of style! It's so sophisticated and unique. And the story was great too! :)

omefg i loved it! you should be so proud of that one, it's so imaginative and witty!

Oh my GOD this is the best story ever! I laughed the entire time, and Sarah is the greatest narrator. There was a little bit of a tense switch for a couple of lines in the middle, but other than that, it was perfect! Great job!
Hanakin:D