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| communist daughter 2002-11-30 ch 1,  | abuseoh my god...this is so great. just absolutely wonderful. your characterization is immaculate, your dialouge fresh and lively, and the whole 'middle east' thing really cinched it all together. you did a perfect revelation of Dayna, just perfect. *blush* will you have my children? just kidding. or maybe not... |