*blinkblink*

It definitely could be a lot more disturbing. There seemed to be something missing from it; I just can't put my finger on it. I'll let you know when I figure out what you could do to make this a freaky(er) fic.

oh, jellybean, I like it.

This was a really cool story.. ^_^ I like it.

OOOOOH soo good! You have done it again!!! You are so talented! I think you should make a sequel showing the *before* or what happens next =D

signed,
~*Lauren*~

very nice...*evil grin*....you've just given a mentally instable lil weirdo an idea. See the lightbulb above my head? mWahahahaha...*runs off*

*Lilane

totally agree...........most all guys are simply pigs ::shakes head::