Cool.. Its very deep.. N very pretty.. in a way.. N wow.. I really liked it very much.. its just.. u know.. Nice.. ok im a lousy reviewer but i like your work a lot..

Nice. I like this a lot.

pretty.I like it.it's nice.The part of the earth softens seems to fit too.when the sun's setting everything does just seem to freeze and soften.

Cat

Very beautiful writing. I really like your style, it's beautiful and refreshing.

So good! Sort of tells me about the growth of a child towards adulthood. :) Hmmm...that's just me though. Very nice, keep it up! :D

Pwease wead my works...pwetty pwease?:) Thank you!

Damn your good. Forgive my English, but this was really well done. I love it, and your interpretations of people, or at least my interpretation of the poem, was fabulous.
~Toireasa

cool

*tries to write a poem*
Aphy likes cheese,
And she hates to sneeze.

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Okay, that was bad, huh? Wow, I love all your poems! They're really good! *stares for a moment* I'm posting up a friends' poem which is really good too. *sighs* I love your poems.

~Aphy

This poem is a masterpiece - oh, yes, I have no doubt about that! This is definitely one of your best, if I do say so myself! Everything flowed so beautifully, and it made me feel...oh, I don't know, sort of sad and happy at the same time! I loved the way that you write!

That's so sad... it reminds me of "Grass," by Carl Sandburg; just because it talks about how beautiful (or, in Sandburg's case, terrible) things are forgotten as the sands of time wear away the memories/sharp edges. Ooh, can I use that line? I actually like it. ^_^ Sorry, I'm feeling more psychotic than usual...
Anyway, I love the message, and it doesn't sound like it was written from the bottom up - and I'm still suffering from mild jealousy over your rhyming coming instinctively! *smile* Beautiful job, and thanks for the reviews - "Haloes," "Stone-Speaker," and "Card Zero."

Eeeeee! Really cool stuff! I always admire those who can write poetry...it's such a beautiful manner of expression. I especially enjoyed the imagery of the world glowing in the sun's last light.

Wow, that was uh, geez I'm trying to think of a better word than "cool" and one not with as much amazed emotion as "amazing" (I expected no less, you being the good poem-writer person you are) and I can't think of a word! Uh...^_^; I liked it though!

Yeah! You put more stuff up for me to review! Yippee! Thanks for still reviewing my stuff, I'm so glad. Anyway, I really loved this poem and I cat tell that you are getting better and better. This is the sweetest poem that I've ever read, very heartfelt I love it! Toodles!

Oh, that's just beautiful. Can I say something about myself really quickly? I didn't know I could squeal in happiness, but then, I'd never been mentioned in a bio before, either. EEEEEE!!! I'm OK... or not. Wow, the poem is just... can't think of the word... beautiful, georgious (which is probably spelled wrongly-- again), uh, stunning, astounding, well, unearthly! Wowow!! Love it! Please keep with the original and the poetry, it makes me very HAPPY to read your wonderful work!
~*~Kiayla~*~
PS. Did I mention it was stunning and astounding and extraordinary? Well, it is... ;D

that was very very beautiful!!!!! I like it alot!!