o_o That was REALLY good. I do feel that way, actually, and quite often...to most people I end up being nice, helpful, perfect girl, right? But inside, I'm in pain and no one is willing to help me. I really liked the ending to that, too.

...you've just inspired me again! *hugs* Thank you.

ur wow!

shin chan you iz takin the words right outta me gob he he! so iz lovin ur stuff! may b we sud do happy writin 2 make readers happier...(may b NOT!)

LATERZ BITCHIN

again, you have perfectly captured the essence of my very being. especially the last two stanzas. it's so, so hard to hang on to yourself and keep the balance. i really like the "hungry" in the last stanza, it somehow emphasizes the hopelessness. this is a really excellent poem. keep up the great work!

Always feel like that..

Bravo. i could see myself in that poem so much. Great job, good poetry speaks and feels to people.