That was beautiful, I'm so glad Dead Caffeine Junkie reccomended you. I added this to my favorites. I loved the rhyme scheme (mine always come out choppy and uneven...heh). Well done.

omg, this is SOOO true. thank you for putting it to words!

That really meant something to me, especially the first stanza, because there were two consecutive suicides at my school, in my year and it was people just like the person in your poem - suddenly people who talked to these people once start crying like they were their best frinds.
In terms of the poem - very beautiful and deep, and as has been said, the rhyming is brilliant.

Wow.. that was very deep.. I like the way it rhymes and kind of tells a story. It's true, stuff like that does happen, and it seems every time that it could have been stopped but everyone just overlooked it. People are quite cruel.. Ah well anyways, great poem. ^-^ ::adds you to favorites::

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*shivers* Wow, that was beautiful. It's so true. I loved it. Beautiful. Very beautiful.

That's powerful. The second to last stanza is really gripping.

WOW! That was good! THe words twisted and turned and squeezed around my heart. It was SO good!

That is a wonderful poem. Both in the theme and in the style. It was great how you kept up the rhyme scheme and didn't screw it up (like oh say i would have) The theme was great. This does happen so much... This is a really really great poem. Keep up the good work - E. *favorites list*