|Reviews for matt in his black sweater|
| SlateAP 12/9/02 . chapter 1
Great job. I can't pretend I didn't get all of it though. Define "diktat" for me, I couldn't figure it out from context. Beyond that however, this poem was great. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.
| Kievsky 12/7/02 . chapter 1
Wonderful, beautiful, a perfect yearning. The colors and imagery are like a horizon line, both the end of one day and the continuation of time and emotion.
You have such cascading style in your poetry.
| kealohikakahiaka 12/2/02 . chapter 1
Aww... That's so sweet, I love your syntax and diction.
| Curtis J. Perry 12/2/02 . chapter 1
I love the use of color theming in this poem. When you press on your skin, turning it white. Like figting fire with fire. Rather, fire with light :P.
| Aviendha19 12/1/02 . chapter 1
i love this poem. its so sharp and sheer, like a breath in the cold. its so truth! there are so many sheer beautiful lines, the bits of red rocks, and walking home. ah.
| Becky Cookie 11/30/02 . chapter 1
| grrrandpa 11/30/02 . chapter 1
That was one of most interesting poems I've ever read. You have a wonderful style, I shall go read more of your work. And thanks for reviewin' my country song!