Great job. I can't pretend I didn't get all of it though. Define "diktat" for me, I couldn't figure it out from context. Beyond that however, this poem was great. Can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Wonderful, beautiful, a perfect yearning. The colors and imagery are like a horizon line, both the end of one day and the continuation of time and emotion.

You have such cascading style in your poetry.

Aww... That's so sweet, I love your syntax and diction.

I love the use of color theming in this poem. When you press on your skin, turning it white. Like figting fire with fire. Rather, fire with light :P.

i love this poem. its so sharp and sheer, like a breath in the cold. its so truth! there are so many sheer beautiful lines, the bits of red rocks, and walking home. ah.

very interesting

That was one of most interesting poems I've ever read. You have a wonderful style, I shall go read more of your work. And thanks for reviewin' my country song!